Love poems
collide
with lonely hearts
in the crowded fissures
of the dark light.
The moon yawns
and switches channels.
Another boring night.
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Linked to 3WW (Boring, Dark, Lonely)
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“co-lied” … Excellent line break.
This is my favorite:
“in the crowded fissures …
The moon yawns
and switches channels.”
Super big grin for this one. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Yes, things can lack the impetus to offer a great evening! Pity! Great lines Thotpurge!
Hank
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Thanks so much Hank 🙂
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I can hear the moon moaning “Oh no! No more reruns!”
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Ha ha… indeed 🙂 Thank you for reading Oldegg.
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The ennui and tedium of everyday life alone screams out in this piece..i never know if TV is good or just a subtle form of sedation!
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teduim the bane of life well expressed in this
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Thank you Sheilagh Lee
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