The sensuous night,
stardust and moonlight
wet on her hungry lips,
slowly unties
the tangled clouds,
threatens the silence of dead emotions.
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The sensuous night,
stardust and moonlight
wet on her hungry lips,
slowly unties
the tangled clouds,
threatens the silence of dead emotions.
Poetweet: Exactly 140 characters long including spaces and punctuation.
Beautiful in its simplicity. Delightful.
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Thank you Keith 🙂
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Beautifully described
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This exhibits a tangential surrealism that makes my head spin and my kidneys swoon. Bravo!
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Thank you Peter, appreciate your comment greatly. Glad you liked the poem.
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You know how it feels every time I come here to read? It is akin to standing still under a drizzle of winter berries. Plop plop they fall. On my nose, my teeth and the top of my head. Invigorating! Absolutely love your verses.
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*Bows head gratefully* … watch out for the sour and bitter berries though 🙂
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Hehe the sourness is subjective, says the man who doesn’t like candies. Keep writing ❤
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That last line is packed with so many underlying stories! Great take on this prompt.
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautifully sensual ~
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Thank you Grace 🙂
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What imagery! Wonderful wordplay, this 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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beautiful words
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Thank you 🙂
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‘silence of dead emotions.’ great line. 🙂
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Thank you:)
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Perhaps that is a good silence to disturb…another visceral and vital write!
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Thanks so much Jae Rose 🙂
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Very beautiful.
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Thank you Dell Clover… challenging words at 3WW this time!
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