Dervishes dance in swirling robes of grey,
circling around our summer emptiness,
the gloomy cadence of the flutes of May,
remember monsoon songs of loneliness.
In opaque mists, a thirsty heart still pines,
shadows huddle in a dissonant head,
broken quatrains shiver on rain drenched lines,
skies cough and wheeze in murky cloaks of dread.
A eulogy lingers, wrapped in oilskin,
memories trickle from a choir of leaves,
the deluge outside floods the soul within,
a watery dirge plays under the eaves.
Like petrichor, love once rose with the breeze,
while rainbows twisted through the verdigris.
I have read this several times over the last two days and each time I am more moved than the last. This is exquisite. I adore all of it, but these lines in particular get me every time: “memories trickle from a choir of leaves, the deluge outside floods the soul within,” Excellent write π
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Thank you so much C.C. So glad you liked it.
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Truly it’s amazing how much of darkness and
light in way of human emotions and senses
become the environment itself.. in associations..
of feeling life.. and more amazing when we
control those association in mostly light..:)
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Thank you Katie π
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you really used a rich selection of words… it added depth to the poems
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Thank you Bill.
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aaah…monsoon…ambrosia to the parched soul…not even a piece of black cloud here in Bengal now….ugh….
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From our summer emptiness, which really exists, to the memories that trickle from a choir of leaves, I feel some kind of fatal, magnetic attraction to your words. But what disciplined cadence to this poem, even is it is intoxicating and dangerou to my senses! Perhaps the lines resonate so well because even so cleverly decorated they feel real, and what is honest, and true is being said: they are not just powerful, and pretty.
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Thank you so much Hamish. That’s very generous of you. Am glad it worked because the Sonnet form was quite a challenge.
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Oh I’m crazy for this one–those final 2 lines especially send me!
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Thank you Dell Clover. Glad you liked it.
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Welcome.
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Ah, yes, May does not just bring lazy, shimmery summer heat, but also monsoon weather. I love the almost excess of imagery of running, dripping, streaming water and the variations of grey you bring to the poem!
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Thanks Marina, appreciate your kind response.
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Rain is so much needed, and when you live in a place where it comes as a Monsoon it must be so different.. So many beautiful images here with the extended metaphor a great backdrop.
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Thanks so much BjΓΆrn
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Here in WA state we get a week or two of rain once in a decade; but your monsoons would devastate the area; not ecologically prepared it seems. I like the line /broken quatrains shiver on rain-drenched lines.
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Thank you Glenn… guess the mountains up in WA have their own beauty as do the wild tropics…we’re lucky to have so many choices..for now π
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Wonderful images in this. I read twice and savored each line. And knowing it is about monsoon – and other things in the soul, made it more powerful and beautiful.
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Thank you Kanzen, am glad you enjoyed it.
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“the deluge outside floods the soul within” – quite an evocative line! I do hope that you have some periods of respite once the rainy season begins!
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Thank you Mary… everything in nature comes to life and becomes beautiful, the rains are a nuisance only in the concrete jungle!
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Your poem made me wonder whether you had a specific place in mind when you wrote this poem. Great and powerful imagery!
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Thanks Gabriella, the monsoon will hit us here in India in a week or so and we can expect three months of rain…it’s a beautiful yet dramatic time of the year.
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I was wondering because of the reference to dervishes.
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No, was just looking at the whirling clouds overhead… though I have watched the dervishes dance in Turkey and they are quite mesmerizing, so maybe a quiet memory there! Maybe!!
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Fun poetry and monsoon images mixed in delightful words of the soul
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Thank you Sabio…
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I agree with Tio Stib. And beautiful imagery!
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Thank you so much for your kind comment.
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“A thirsty heart still pines.” I am awed by the eloquence and emotional power of this poem. Truly inspiring.
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Thanks so much Tio Stib π
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