‘Cow dust’ or “Godhuli” is the shimmering dust haze created during sunset by cattle columns returning home after grazing all day. A magical time that evokes the epic story of Radha’s love for Krishna, the charming, flute-playing cowherd.
Cowbells sing of times gone by,
as cattle march in the evening light,
and golden clouds rise in the sky.
She follows him, the maiden, shy,
his flute beckons the waiting night,
cowbells sing of times gone by.
Hearts and cows and haystacks sigh,
hooves set enchanting dust in flight,
and golden clouds rise in the sky.
He turns, he smiles, catches her eye,
plays their song of love’s sweet plight,
cowbells sing of times gone by.
Through glittering haze, ravens fly,
wood fires bubble in soft twilight,
and golden clouds rise in the sky.
Incense floats from the temple high,
souls dance with angels, out of sight,
cowbells sing of times gone by,
and golden clouds rise in the sky.
Linked to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Villanelle Challenge.
THIS:
“Through glittering haze, ravens fly,
wood fires bubble in soft twilight,
and golden clouds rise in the sky.”
and the final stanza…LOVE your take on the form!
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He turns, he smiles, catches her eye,
plays their song of love’s sweet plight,
Such sincere reactions may open a waiting heart. Beautiful Villanelle Thots!
http://imagery77.blogspot.my/2017/06/ever-remembered-when-one-was-in-nursery.html
Hank
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Thank you Hank 🙂
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Wonderful images!
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Thank you…
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An original theme for a lovely villanelle.
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Thanks Beverly.
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Now, this is a villanelle! The meter and rhyme are flawless, melting into the poem effortlessly! Well done!
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Thanks so much Walter.
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I like this one! It flows gently and steadily, like homing cattle through the golden dust. Gorgeous 🙂
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Thanks so much Jane.
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🙂
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I can see it like I’m there. Gorgeous. I especially like the fire bubbling.
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Thank you 🙂🙂
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Aha…a beautiful godhuli song this one is Rajani. Love drenched in color and sound wafting from far away time.
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Thanks Sumana!!
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What a wonderful revisit – I can see that moment with the sun and the dust.
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Thanks Bjorn … nice to pull one out of the archives once in a while!
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That reminded me of Radha and Krishna before I read the introduction to the poem. Nice villanelle.
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Nice!!! Thanks Frank. The only other one I wrote was linked to Dverse two years ago: https://thotpurge.wordpress.com/2015/05/18/village-well/
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Never knew this. You have such a gift of soulful brevity!
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Thank you … though I do want to give a long, rambling confessional kind of epic a shot..some day 🙂
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Confessional or not, it’d be invigorating to read, looking forward comrade 🙂
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You painted some beautiful images with your words – and those are one of my favourites too – thank you for joining my prompt and welcome to OLN.
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Thank you Abhra. Glad you liked the poem.
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I find vilanelles so difficult, and here you do it so well, the reader almost doesn’t notice. The subject is perfect for the form; the repetition just adds to the restful, ‘end of day well done’ feel.
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Thank you for your kind comment Mary. Think I got lucky because I picked the easiest rhyming words! 🙂
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lovely villanelle. I like the personification of hay stacks sighing along with the hearts and the cows.
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Thanks so much Bryan.
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This is a magical write…and it creates a nice atmosphere as well!
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Thank you Mary 🙂
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Wonderful words! Well done.
Anna :o]
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Thank you very much Anna.
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What a stunning Villanelle – the situation itself with the dust cloud.. There is magic in that moment and the ties to Mytology – really enjoyed this one.
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Thank you Björn… appreciate your comment very much.
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Villanelles can be tricky; yours has the polish of a hand-rubbed car hood, gleaming, smooth. I always use a rhyming dictionary to give spice & variety to the rhyme schemes; yours rock the form, putting us into a foreign landscape, but familiar emotions.
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Thanks so much Glenn for your very kind comment 🙂
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He turns, he smiles, catches her eye,
plays their song of love’s sweet plight,
cowbells sing of times gone by.
Gives a feeling of completion of an episode. Though not without the confusion that normally happens when the dust is disturbed. But there are fond moments in between! Great lines thotpurge!
Hank
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Thanks so much.. glad those lines worked.
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Beautiful villanelle. This can be a tricky form to write to without it sounding stilted, but you have done a wonderful job with the rhyme scheme. Peace, Linda
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Thank you Linda…. tough form indeed.. appreciate your kind comment.
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intoxicating imagery. thank you.
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Thank you Tio Stib 🙂 Glad you liked it.
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Wow !!
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I wanted to send it to you to read.. am glad you did and even more glad you wow-ed it 🙂
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Wonderful. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Lovely — and truly pastoral! Love the tale you’ve woven here simply spoken and beautiful … this is perfect … fiendish or not, you certainly make the villanelle look easy to write!
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Thanks Bastet..that’s very kind. It was a great prompt and that colour coding was a winner! 🙂
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Glad the colour coding helped .. I’ve always had a lot of difficulty reading the “instructions” of how to write a form … colour coding helped me a lot in the past!
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Perfect, perfect! Your tone, your imagery — and the subject itself — perfect for villanelle 🙂
You and I both know it’s not effortless – but each line is so smooth – not a word out of place. Wow!
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Thank you so much… oh yeah, it sent me into a crazy loop, this one! Am glad it worked.. there just aren’t enough good rhyming words!! Thanks for this prompt at B&J!!
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Oh, I know what you mean — starting my villanelle this evening — and it’s been a while since I worried about rhyme — sorely out of practice!
Working with the villanelle was Bastet’s inspiration — she’ll be very happy to see what you’ve done here. 🙂
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I bet to witness “Godhuli” in real life would be poetry for the eyes. Thank you for capturing it so that we (I) can imagine in it the way of words. Amazing, gifted writing here. A gem. Cheers ~
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Thank you for your very generous comment. There is much beauty in the simple emotions of nature…. am glad you liked this one.
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We have too much cow dust blown’ around here…need rain! Nice villanelle form and theme 🙂
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Thanks so much Lynn 🙂 Hope you folks get the rain you need. Parts here have had unseasonal rain with so many crops destroyed. It’s a mess.
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Sorry to hear of crop loss 😦
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