tonight’s last moonbeam
eager for dawn’s gentle touch
impossible love
For RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Prompt Challenge #42 (Love&Last)
April:#42- 29/30
tonight’s last moonbeam
eager for dawn’s gentle touch
impossible love
For RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Prompt Challenge #42 (Love&Last)
April:#42- 29/30
Love in’t impossible …
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That last line is so so moving! I wonder if the moon who still competes for attention at dawn then pffft vanishes is a sign of love…how fleeting yet how precious.
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Thank you 🙂 The more impossible, the more precious perhaps 🙂
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I totally agree.
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The older I get, the more impossible I’m finding love to be.
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True that!! But who knows what’s waiting round the corner!
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Oh dear oh dear…..just so, so good. Really. Any added words are superfluous.
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Thank you Hamish… very glad you liked it..wrote it for a two word prompt..sometimes those get very crazy 🙂
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wonderful, and sad. lovely words.
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Thanks so much Claudette.
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Gorgeous and a true haiku! Love it! 😀
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Thanks so much Vashti 🙂
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Lovely!
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Thanks Ryan 🙂
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beautiful and intriguing
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Thank you Daffodil 🙂
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