just for a moment
the soft breath of the cosmos
warm against my soul
warm against my soul
the orange rhythm of dawn
exhaling the night
exhaling the night
an awakened day draws in
primordial air
primordial air
tells tales of a hundred lungs
like a traveller
like a traveller
the cosmos breathes in my soul
just for a moment
April:#26- 16/30
THOUGHT PURGE 
Wonderful series Thot, that cascading way of writing looks very much alike with breathing. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you so much… you keep the inspiration going with your prompts!
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Ow, wow! 🙂
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Thanks for that response!!! 🙂
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Beautiful.
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Thank you Janicead 🙂
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“tales of a hundred lungs”
Wonder if Scheherazade ever thought of telling those? 😉
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Ha ha! Would be just as fascinating hopefully 🙂
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I like the way you transitioned using the last phrase as the first phrase of the following section of your poem…! Wonderfully written!
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Thanks so much Ompong… was a new experiment for me too- the haiku chain!
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I love it… And your work inspired me to think of a haiku with such a chain like yours. 🙂
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That’s great Ompong… waiting to read it!!
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Love your haiku chain and especially that last one…wow!
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Thank you.. first time I’ve done a haiku chain, relieved it worked 🙂
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This is very beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🙂 Was interesting to try a haiku chain.
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