4 micro-poems in 3-5-3. First real shot at this format. Which one works?

sad dervish
whirls to his own tune
the earth slows
misplaced words
cruise empty spaces
lost poem
through the trees
the mist keeps searching
for its face
rising tides
reach the hot cliff top
rocks exhale
April:#15- 08/30


16 thoughts on “Micropoetry-1

      1. You’re very welcome πŸ™‚

        But — oh dear! 1/3/1! I shudder to think!
        You’d do magnificently, though, even in those constraints πŸ™‚


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