Micropoetry-1

4 micro-poems in 3-5-3. First real shot at this format. Which one works?

***
sad dervish
whirls to his own tune
the earth slows
***
misplaced words
cruise empty spaces
lost poem
***
through the trees
the mist keeps searching
for its face
***
rising tides
reach the hot cliff top
rocks exhale
***
April:#15- 08/30

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16 thoughts on “Micropoetry-1

      1. You’re very welcome πŸ™‚

        But — oh dear! 1/3/1! I shudder to think!
        You’d do magnificently, though, even in those constraints πŸ™‚

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