#43

It is time.
The future cowers
behind our past.
And now,
the hours
have converged into
this one moment,
when I must
free my hand
from yours.

Poetweet: Exactly 140 characters long including spaces and punctuation.
April:#5- 03/30

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22 thoughts on “#43

  1. In your poem I read how difficult it is sometimes to move from past into future….especially when holding someone’s hand when that journey will not be together. Thank you, Thotpurge, for supporting Poetry Jam. I always enjoy your work….wherever I see it!

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    1. Thanks a lot Mary. It’s a pity Poetry Jam needs to go offline now.. but will catch up with you on other forums. Thanks so much for your encouragement and kind words.

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  2. Ah! I love this one! However, I read it just after listening to CΓ©line Dion’s “Goodbye’s” (The Saddest Word). Eeesh, I’m going to have to put on some really upbeat music now!
    Your words were perfect, though.

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    1. Thanks Gabriella… love your interpretation as well…more breathing space! This is the fun of poetry isn’t it… the brevity lets us apply our own framework to it!

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