A solitary flame
strides through
the brooding dark.
Could it be him?
The tepid wind mocks –
is bringing home
a lucky star.

Poetweet: Exactly 140 characters long including spaces and punctuation.

April:#2- 01/30

For the Poetry Jam prompt: Flame


16 thoughts on “#41

  1. Your poem is very evocative. One flame would definitely really stand out in the dark. And…the lucky star makes me smile…something we perhaps all hope for?


  2. Good to see your post here. The idea of a single flame in brooding dark is a strong image. Making it exactly 140 characters long is quite a challenge. Excellent.


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